OK, so I’ve completed a first draft. I’ve even done a couple of significant rewrites and done several editing passes.
Just a few hours ago I was feeling pretty good about myself.
Then I decided to do some research about the next steps, and I am starting to wonder if writing the damn book is the easiest part of the whole process!
The main thing that has me concerned has been a series of articles and blog posts on the subject of a “query letter.” A query letter is what an author sends to an agent to get the agent to decide whether to offer to read the book. That’s all.
In reading the descriptions of what agents love and hate about query letters, I have started to realize that I’ve got a LOT of work left to do on this book. To stretch a horrible metaphor, all I have done so far is create a rough approximation of the final story, sort of like I’ve taken a blob of clay and have shaped it into a stick figure of a person before working at all on any of the detail and uniqueness of the piece.
The one single comment made over and over by agents in response to “what do you want to see in a query letter” was this: “Explain in a single paragraph or two why I would want to read your book.”
Wow. You know, all this time I’ve been working on my book, my whole thought has been about why I want to WRITE the book.
But that’s really not even the point.
Now I have to go back and look at the book from an entirely different perspective so I can answer the question of why anyone would want to read it.
“Because it’s good.” Ha.
“Because it’s got great characters.” Tell me about it.
“Because it’s got great action scenes!” Right.
“Because it’s about magic and exotic lands and places!” So is a travel guide.
Sigh…
Why would anyone want to read my book?
Gonna have to think on that one for a bit.
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Follow-up comment rss or Leave a TrackbackCongratulations on looking fear in the face. Well, the ultimate fear of writers that is. I’ve read many books about writing and the dreaded query letter. If it helps, some writing books say that why the author writes it and why people want to read it are the same thing. What is relative to your readers? Is the story different from other stories in the same genre? (I’ve actually been thinking a lot about this too) Pretend you’ve picked up this book for the first time, and think about how you would react to certain aspects of your story. Another question you can ask is: What’s memorable about my story? You can even go over what you like about the characters, plot, setting etc. Think of it like approaching your story from a different angle. Or if you got amnesia one day and picked your own novel up. What would you take away from the story?
Anyway, I hope this helps. I’ve read a lot on this subject.
So it’s not so much the query letter itself I am concerned about. It’s what the query letter is making me do, which is re-examine my story from a different angle. What is hilarious to me is that I deliberately had the first book follow a fairly standard fantasy storyline deliberately to set up the “reveals” in the second and third book, and now I’m thinking that is going to be a problem for getting people interested in the first book, and if they don’t read the first book, well, they obviously won’t read the second or third books… But I had an idea today… More on another post.
Check this out: http://www.baen.com/FAQS.asp#Manuscript%20Submission%20Guidelines
Well, they make it simple enough…
But 12-18 months for a REPLY???
ug. Not great news.
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